Thursday, April 2, 2015

Second essay



I have now completed my second essay in my writing class. This is good news, very good news. For one, that means I have only one more essay to write, which is a big relief. Secondly, that means the semester is coming to an end and we can all stop pulling our hair out. The second essay was focused on The Glass Castle, by Jeannette Walls. In my essay I specifically focused on self-sufficiency and how the Walls family upheld this life style, and the emotional and psychological trauma the children have as a result. In comparison with my last essay, this one is certainly much better in my opinion. My last essay was honestly rushed and I did not have such a great argument, but for this second essay I believe I do. Overall, I feel my second essay has more supportive information to back up my claim and is organized. While writing this essay, I took my time more and actually focused. Thus, not only was I less stressed, but I was also satisfied in my writing, which is something I truly love. This paper indeed allowed more flexibility in what I want to focus on, so I credit that to me being more focused. This will be the second time I have read the memoir The Glass Castle, and after reading it a second time, I knew right away what I wanted my focus to be. Self-sufficiency is a key factor in the novel, obviously so since the Walls lived by this idea, and so I knew right away this would be my focus. After finding passages, quotes, and articles on self-sufficiency and psychological and emotional trauma, I began to write.  Thus, paper two was completed and I am one step closer to finishing this semester.

1 comment:

  1. I think that self-sufficiency was an excellent choice of a topic to focus the second paper on. I wrote about self-sufficiency in my paper as well. There are a lot of examples in the book of how Mr. and Mrs. Walls promoted self-reliance and independence and the effects it had on their family. Now, we have two papers down and one more to go!

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